Mommy's Addiction [Rhyme Royal]

by Infected with His Deadly Love   Jun 23, 2007


Sharp knives and glass, I would find in your hand
Never ending pain, I saw in your eyes
Cuts and scars on your wrist, that you had planned
Depression, panic attacks; painful cries
I needed you but you didn't realise
I tried to help, but you pushed me away
I never knew what to think or to say

Rhyme Royal:
A poem consisting 7 lines with 10 syllables per line. The rhyme scheme is ababbcc:-

Line 1: a
Line 2: b
Line 3: a
Line 4: b
Line 5: b
Line 6: c
Line 7: c

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  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    Very sad, and also very deep. I could feel the emotion. Although you chose a short poem style, you told plenty within it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Riz

    The pattern doesn't to be much appeal to me but the poem's still good. It expressed in a way, like you felt helpless and that you couldn't do anything about it. It's like they can't hear you and just do whatever they want to do. which hurts. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Very beautifully written and strong. You made your emotions felt and the format was great. Keep writing.
    cheers, josh

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem's truly greatly written, I like the choice of words and the emotions in it are really strong.
    Sad but powerful poem.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow very short but sweet 4.5 thats rounds up to a 5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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