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I read this poem before when you posted it. I found it to be great read showing you dreams clearly throughout this poem. Well done on writing this. Keep up the good work`mel
A beautiful dream to have.
I hope it come true.
Very sweet and a pleasure to read.
Great piece of writing
Thank you for commenting my poem, really appreciate it.
Nice work, short but self explanatory, i like the description of the sounds of children's feet. I hope it comes true for you.
You deserve it.
by WiNgS Of StEeL
Lovd it...great flow..and it was a gr8 piece to read:D
keep up the good work
It was great! just loved it
keep up the good work!:D
I just had to read it again!!...this poem is one of my favs....one day yu will live that dream..!! tk care bree
Everyone has a dream ,dreams should be held onto.This one I hope will come true for you.Excellent write !!I really liked it.
by Noelle Wright
This usually isnt what a mans dream would be =) i hope you get it nice work
by Serina the Squid
You write sweet poetry. :) I really like your stuff. Don't have much else to say lol.
by Shirani Graham
Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love your poems..
I loved the last line!
This dream truely sounds perfect =)
I love this part
Pitter patter children's feet
Two I hope
I want to kids as well with my hubby
This is a beautiful dream which can be reality. I hope that it finds you
hope someday I will be the
one dreaming of this
Lovely poem Steve you have kept it nice and simple easy to understand. I am married to a lovely man and i can relate to this so well done i give you a 5 :)
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
I love this poem very catchy and natural...the feelings is injected in every line...
If only it would all come true one day
Lovely dream to have.
Such a lovely dream and poem.
Never give up
Thanks for your comment.