I read this poem before when you posted it. I found it to be great read showing you dreams clearly throughout this poem. Well done on writing this. Keep up the good work`mel

A beautiful dream to have.
I hope it come true.
Very sweet and a pleasure to read.
Great piece of writing

Thank you for commenting my poem, really appreciate it.
Take care

Nice work, short but self explanatory, i like the description of the sounds of children's feet. I hope it comes true for you.
You deserve it.
Greta

Lovd it...great flow..and it was a gr8 piece to read:D
keep up the good work
bree

It was great! just loved it
keep up the good work!:D
bree

I just had to read it again!!...this poem is one of my favs....one day yu will live that dream..!! tk care bree

Everyone has a dream ,dreams should be held onto.This one I hope will come true for you.Excellent write !!I really liked it.

This usually isnt what a mans dream would be =) i hope you get it nice work

Noelle

You write sweet poetry. :) I really like your stuff. Don't have much else to say lol.

Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love your poems..

Nazeer

I loved the last line!
This dream truely sounds perfect =)
5/5

Beautiful

I love this part

Pitter patter children's feet
Two I hope

I want to kids as well with my hubby

This is a beautiful dream which can be reality. I hope that it finds you

Nice poem

x

Great dream
great poem
hope someday I will be the
one dreaming of this

Lovely poem Steve you have kept it nice and simple easy to understand. I am married to a lovely man and i can relate to this so well done i give you a 5 :)

I love this poem very catchy and natural...the feelings is injected in every line...

Gel

I love this poem very catchy and natural...the feelings is injected in every line...

Gel

Lovely dream to have.

Such a lovely dream and poem.

Never give up