Comments : My Dream

  • 13 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I read this poem before when you posted it. I found it to be great read showing you dreams clearly throughout this poem. Well done on writing this. Keep up the good work`mel

  • 13 years ago

    by Hebe

    A beautiful dream to have.
    I hope it come true.
    Very sweet and a pleasure to read.
    Great piece of writing

    Thank you for commenting my poem, really appreciate it.
    Take care

  • 13 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Nice work, short but self explanatory, i like the description of the sounds of children's feet. I hope it comes true for you.
    You deserve it.
    Greta

  • 13 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    Lovd it...great flow..and it was a gr8 piece to read:D
    keep up the good work
    bree

  • 13 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    It was great! just loved it
    keep up the good work!:D
    bree

  • 13 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    I just had to read it again!!...this poem is one of my favs....one day yu will live that dream..!! tk care bree

  • 13 years ago

    by June

    Everyone has a dream ,dreams should be held onto.This one I hope will come true for you.Excellent write !!I really liked it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    This usually isnt what a mans dream would be =) i hope you get it nice work

    Noelle

  • 13 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    You write sweet poetry. :) I really like your stuff. Don't have much else to say lol.

  • 12 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love your poems..

    Nazeer

  • 12 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    I loved the last line!
    This dream truely sounds perfect =)
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by bianca

    Beautiful

  • 9 years ago

    by Lioness

    I love this part

    Pitter patter children's feet
    Two I hope

    I want to kids as well with my hubby

    This is a beautiful dream which can be reality. I hope that it finds you

    Nice poem

    x

  • 7 years ago

    by therhesha

    Great dream
    great poem
    hope someday I will be the
    one dreaming of this

  • 7 years ago

    by Roseanne

    Lovely poem Steve you have kept it nice and simple easy to understand. I am married to a lovely man and i can relate to this so well done i give you a 5 :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    I love this poem very catchy and natural...the feelings is injected in every line...

    Gel

    • 3 years ago

      by STEVE

      If only it would all come true one day

  • 3 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    I love this poem very catchy and natural...the feelings is injected in every line...

    Gel

  • 3 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Lovely dream to have.

  • 3 years ago

    by Em

    Such a lovely dream and poem.

    Never give up

    • 3 years ago

      by STEVE

      Thanks for your comment.