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by Cassandra   Jun 30, 2007


Careless fools with a knife in their back
are blamed for the deceit,a lovers careless attack
Who's to judge the man who's unable to see
blinded by an illusion, a false guarantee

Unimagined heartless creatures
carry the knife the first section features
Thrust the blade into trust
look aside as love dies with disgust

Who's to blame in this game of deception
when pain rains down with no exception
Suffering is not measured with amount of tears
but with the darkness of a heart consumed with fears

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  • 9 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    That was nice .. You should explore this type of writing a little more for yourself .. : ) .. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    WOW Very well written

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is just one of the best rhyming poems I have read. I loved the lines dear. Its so catching and the flow is beautiful. BY the way I think if you make fear plural, the poem would have a better rhythm. Anyways its 5/5 for sure.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    All I can say is WOW, i thought it was very well written and put together.All the words just seemed to flow consistently and they sounded perfect in there sequence, nice job
    and the ending just tied it all together and made it the perfect ending, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very dark very deep great job the strength was felt as i read very good write 5/5

    laura

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