Vengeful Right

by Kirsty palmer   Jul 1, 2007


Standing there so tall and strong,
Towering over the girls petite frame
Brass shoulders either side
Showing that you're ready for the game

"Not this time, please.. I don't want to"
Said that tiny voice that you should love
But once more you refuse to listen
And you fasten on that rubber glove
"Please just let me stay and sleep today"
Said that same timid voice from her
But you shrug it off and drag her up
Refusing to communicate; with you things become a blur

You should have listened to what she said
Then maybe you would still be here today
Never judge a girl by her tiny frame
Always listen to what she has to say

The story goes on, as you made her
Fighting for life she had to do as she was told
Cleaning up after your mess that you made
Then crying herself to sleep with no one to hold
The next morning she wakes to fine yet another job
This time it's a boy of only four
Maybe that's what made her turn
seeing his corpse laying froze on the floor

No longer wishing for you to control her
She took matters into her own hands
Wanting to get away from your evilness
Firmly she refused to stand

Your ambition was overwhelming
How could someone acquire so much hate?
She was right to do what she needed to do
Why should she carry all that weight?
So as the day came when once again she refused
Where you tried to make her kill one she loved
You envied the fact that she was stronger than you
And hated that fact that you got shoved

So that's when it ended between you both
As she grabbed what was grasped by your fingers
And as she prayed, the knife was raised
In hope that your spirit never lingers

* hope you can catch Part II to see how it ends. *

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    I apprechiate your comment. i know that this is not a very powerful ending .. which is why there is a part two coming soon. hope you can catch the ending.
    thank you for your comment.. kirsty xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Ok, it was pretty good.But at the end you just leave it hanging.It doesnt seem like its finished.Because thatsnot a very good way to end it, sorry, i am gonna have to say, 4/5