Tell me Why

by Spirit   Jul 2, 2007


Help me, save me
why don't you stay with me
how come they all say that
We were never meant to be

Tell me, speak to me
tell me that I'm wrong
heal me mend my heart
least listen to my song

a song, a true song
i wrote for you ago
your song, your one song
you've said you'd always know

So hear me, touch me
tell me the reason why
come back, hold me
what happened to you and I

say something, anything
don't lie there down and sad
get up and tell me why
I'm still wanting what we had

sit up come back
and tell me it's all good
do something, anything
anything you could

hug me, kiss me
like the day we wed
come back, please come back
tell me why you're dead

(dedicated to any one who lost someone near and dear to them)

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Very good poem, I enjoyed it very much.

    Now i must read more :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wow, wonderful poem
    touching and deep, i can imagine the event great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is so heartwrenching..I have tears in my eyes.

    The emotion in this is just beautifully created..so powerful and intense.

    "a song, a true song
    i wrote for you ago
    your song, your one song
    you've said you'd always know"

    I wrote for you ago-long ago?

    Other than that, this was beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A touching story. I didn't experienced any kind of loss before, but I am sure many can relate to this poem. Structure and rhyming very nice. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Your word choice was ok in this, the rhythm was a bit jumpy, but the flow was flawless...
    i dont think this was totally your best, but its still really good... good job

    ~Sandra

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