With Lasting Love {{triolet}}

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Jul 3, 2007


Fill my goblet with lasting love,
And allow it to overflow,
With the melody of a dove;
Fill my goblet with lasting love,
Until it reaches high above,
And slowly trickles down below;
Fill my goblet with lasting love,
And allow it to overflow.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Beautifully penned poem! :) You have a great vocab, Flow was flawless, I think it was perfect, well done!

    5/5 all the way!

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Nice, simple, easy to remember, i like it!

    your servant:
    david

  • 16 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    I like triolets (:
    this is crisp and lasting, and they flow so well, they and this are flawless.

    great work.

    Tom

  • 16 years ago

    by pretending im over you

    Thanks for the comment on my poem! this one of yours is really good..it sounds like something that came out of a romeo and juliet novel!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Great job expressing these feelings, i especially liked the last couple of lines. keep up the good work!

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