Hate

by Kara P   Jul 5, 2007


Hate

If you were a flower,
I'd rip off your stem.
If you were a tree,
I'd cut you down.
If you were a student,
I'd give you an F.
If you were lamp,
I'd take out your bulb.
If you were a parent,
I'd kidnapp your child.
If you were a planet,
I'd remove the sun.
If you were an ocean,
I'd kill all your fish.
If you were a cyclops,
I'd poke out your eye.
If you were a bird,
I'd cut off your wings.
If you were a soldier,
I'd shoot you myself.
If you were a window,
I'd break all your glass.
If you were a sweater,
I'd pull out your string.
If you were a country,
I'd rip your flag in half.
Like you did to my heart,
you took it in your hands,
and then you pulled it apart.
Now I Hate you,
and I want you dead.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very creative piece of poetry. I liked the way you have put the words. All in one 5/5 :)

    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    It was different. I liked it. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet Fragility

    Very intense and... angry? But the word choice really got the point across and showed the feelings in this piece. Wonderful job and keep up the good work!

    If you were a planet,
    I'd remove the sun.

    Fave lines ^^^^^^^^^^^^^

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. there was so much hate, i liked it but a few lines i didn't really like, example;
    If you were a parent,
    I'd kidnapp your child.

    but other than that, it was a great poem. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is a very intense poem that really got its point across

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