Just wish you could see...

by Monica AKA Mika   Jul 6, 2007


Baby I'm so happy i found you- You mean the world to me,
I don't know what i would do without you- I just wish you could see...

Your the light to my dark, the wick to my candle,
I know that if i ever have a problem its nothing you cant handle...

You can always make me smile- Even when your nowhere near,
And now that i have you-Losing you is my greatest fear.

What you do to me is something i cant even explain,
And the fact that i cant describe this feeling is driving me insane.

Just listen when i say that there will never be another you,
Because nobody can hold me, Kiss me, Touch me or do anything you do.

Your the one who i think about all the time, the one in my dreams,
Your the one who makes me feel like life is more then it seems.

Baby I'm so happy that i found you- You mean the world to me,
But my feelings are too real for words, Baby you could NEVER see...

...How much i love you...

Written By:Monica AKA Mika

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  • 16 years ago

    by Javier

    O wow i love the ending the last stanza was amazing to me, i hope you dont mind me commenting all of your poems....either way 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I liked this one alot. i can really relate to this even though the guy i want to see hates me with everything.. oh well... the poem flowed very nicely. and i can also feel the emotions th rough the entire poem. i rated this a 5.

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    I really really enjoyed reading this piece :) full of emotion wouldnt it be great if everyone could be that happy in a relationship!! anyway nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Aww.. that's really sweet, it was simple but beautiful - just like real love :) Flow was smooth, you have a great vocab.

    And the fact that i cant describe this feeling is driving me insane.
    ^^ I really adore this line. I think everyone that is in love can relate to this :)

    Thanks for sharing ^_^ And THANK you for the comment - it made me smile :)

    I'll Message you when I have a new poem ^_^ TC.

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. it was a great poem, i like the structure, it looks great. the way you write is just beautifully written. great work. 5/5

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