Why cant she find the right guy

by Michelle18   Jul 8, 2007


She wears a fake smile,
to cover up the pain.
if no one can see it,
no one will no its driving her insane.
she goes everyday,
pretending she's full of joy.
but when she comes home,she cries,
because she's tired of being played like a toy.
why cant she find the right guy?
that will treat her like a queen.
one that loves her so much,
like in the movie scenes.
the perfect cinderella,
with the perfect Mr. right.
someone who will hold her close,
every day and every night.
one day she wishes to find him,
and keep him close to her heart.
they'll be together forever,
and together they'll never part.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Good poem. That sounds just like me. Everyday i have to wear a fake smile to cover
    up th pain.
    Every time i think i find he
    something goes wrong.Evernight i have to cry myself to sleep always tring to find the right guy. but i dont think i ever will.

  • 16 years ago

    by oldthings

    Aw, sad and sweet. Excellent poem becuase its somethign that people, almost all people, can relate to. male and female, lots of guys feel that too.. except they don't want to be made to feel like queens of course. I could really feel for this poem. i liked the ryhmes, It was easy to read and the flow was good too.
    keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    When I first read this poem, it
    was so sad. It touches my heart.
    This is so real, and true. I like this
    piece of yours. Thanks for commenting
    my poems. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Awww i like this poem.. it's a question every girl wonders about and you did a good job putting the feeling into words.. nice job.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Once again another well penned poem. I also fake my smiles when I'm sad :(

    Anyway I think the flow was okay, I have one suggestion though.. try to put it into stanzas =)

    Nonetheless a good read.

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