Destination just simple happiness

by my name is Llama   Jul 10, 2007


A light is shining as faint as it may be.
Full of hope and imagination within.
Translucent window surrounds her heart,
Allowing light to touch upon her soul.
Memories continue and never do fade.
The outlook and essence does change.
Challenges and endurance begin to peak.
This once dark abyss reincarnates,
Blossoms into a disarray of potential.
This shallow poison attempting ransom,
Triumphed the initial but lost in odyssey.
Escape and not dwell the prison of past,
Elucidate and be free from ambiguity.
Destination just simple happiness.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffani

    Loved the meaning to this poem. really enjoyed reading this. deffinitally a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Oscar

    This was really good, you used such strong words to help with the imagery and you did it rightfully so. This poem was exploding with emotions and descriptions that made me love it.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Oh my god. it was great, short yet you got the point across so strong. the imagery was strong, the structure was great, and the flow was perfect. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    This one wasn't as good as others I've read of yours, but I still enjoyed it. Very well written, and emotional. It kept me thinking. It was smooth and such, though it seemed slightly forced in some places

    overall

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    How u describe of your emotions in each lines are very well said..It was beautiful though it was sad too.Keepit up =)

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