I hate that i love you

by HaileyHelen   Jul 11, 2007


I love the way you look at me
with that sparkle in your eye!
I just wish you knew
that sparkle makes me cry!
I love the way we could always talk
that you trusted me!
I just wish you knew my heart had a lock
and you were the holder of the key!
I love the way you hug me tight
with you arms placed down low!
I just wish you knew
i never wanted you to let me go!
i love the way your always there.
I just wish i knew if you really care.
i love the way you hold me when i cry.
I just wish you knew
i cry because you lied.
I love it when you tell me something real.
I just wish i knew how you feel.
But what brakes my heart
is were still far apart
and im just wishing that i hated you

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  • 17 years ago

    by isabel

    The feeling in this poem is something amazing... And I can surely relate to it...
    it flows very nicely as well...
    but maybe you ought to divide it into several stanzas, because you change the rhyme scheme during the poem and with a single stanza the form get's a little bit confusing...

    another thing is you wrote "break" without the "e"...
    not that much of a problem though... easy to change :)
    I also think you could capitalize the first letter of each stanza... it would look better... that's up to you though...

    yet the feeling is expressed so wonderfully i can only give 5/5

    *keep up*
    isabel

  • 18 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Very good poem very expressive and alot of emotion.
    good job

    ashleigh

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