Reality for me

by LiNa   Jul 13, 2007


2 cuts on Monday
3cuts on Wednesday
4cuts on Friday
2 cuts on my birthday
the truth i could never cover up
the truth i cant deny
the place i don't want to revisit when I'm hie or passed out
so how to stay away from the place i hate the most
live life everyday without the drugs
try to realize this is my reality the place i have to be
verses my fantasy were things could never be
cuts on me describe no pain or misery
only stupid mistakes that describe me and what i went through these days
Monday, Wednesday, Friday, my birthday
these days are all real to me i remember the pain and the tears i cried these days

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  • 16 years ago

    by natyy

    I really like the poems uve written about this situations..good job.like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Very nice and collabarated i would say something but i would not want you to take it personal but if you were to legnthen your poem and paint a picture with it it would be soo much better 4/5 but it is still a very good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "cuts on me describe no pain or misery
    only stupid mistakes that describe me and what i went through these days "

    i love those lines..it takes something negative and gives it a positive message, how its not a representation but more of a reminder..excellent work!

  • 16 years ago

    by King of Pain

    Your poem tells me of your inner battle. You are very talented and your gift is an asset to this whole planet. Never forget how valuable you are to all of us.

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