I'm sure i've read this before, have you re-posted it? Or have you wrote one similar? I definately remember reading one of our explicit poems which i found hilarious then i couldn't find it a few weeks later when i tried showing it to somone.
Anyway if it is the same one still made me giggle just as much as the first time round lol.
This was quite amusing to tell you the truth. An effective piece with a nice flow and great word choice. Something different and great. Really interesting to get the reader hooked with it. What more can I say to this then well done on writing such an entertaining explict poem.~mel
Hahaha! I love it! Simply amazing! I can really picture it in my mind ^_^ It was like watching a movie xD The opening stanza really grabs the reader's attention. And the ending was superb! ^_^ I love it *One of my Favorites*
I know for certain that I'm not allowed to read this particular theme. But I'm afraid I find it quite entertaining to read; in fact, the way you've written a lascivious and malevolent interaction in such a vivid, humorous approach humored me exceedingly. Its technical aspects are above reproach...Fantastic...Amusing to say the least. Keep on writing what you feel and like, hehe. I hope you all the best and take care. 5/5 ~Marian
LOL very good! Made me laugh, but also just written very well!! Honestly... IDK how you even go about writing a poem like that... so well done! Keep writing... your poem was very entertaining... and well... now I definatly plan on reading more of your work! Take care :-)