Folly, and Games

by Corruption   Jul 13, 2007


Once upon a time
there were unicorns
but this was before...
A flood made them disappear

there were two of them
they were playful
big teasers
all that caused their downfall

so when Noah
called all the animals
the unicorns played
a game of hide and seek

so the rain started to come
and Noah searched
but these pro hiders
were not found

Noah gave up
and set sail
and this was the time
when the unicorns disappeared

they cried through the storm
adding to the flood
but Noah did not hear
that is why unicorns are gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Hey, Very interesting thought what about the dinosaurs though?? Do you have one for them too?? That would pretty much complete your series on this.. I like it it's really cool and actually makes you think. ttyl

    Beck

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    This was quite innovative, Keenan. It's quite bitter and sweet as well. Poignantly appealing, I dare say. =]

    Nice work.

    Best wishes,
    Marian

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    Awwe this is such an awesome poem, it's so creative, it made me laugh!! great just keenan!!!!! 5/5;)

  • 16 years ago

    by Ixora

    Very interesting concept for the poem here, i liked it

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Really interesting poem :) i really like it...

    ashleigh

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