Forever and always

by crystaljean88   Jul 15, 2007


Im in love,
But with my enemy.
Whats the reason,
You have to hate me.

My eyes hurt,
Cause off all the tears.
My love never ended,
After all these years.

Come back to me,
Not to her.
I will do anything,
My heart is broken and your my cure.

Leave ya gurl,
And you will see.
I am the one,
That will make you free.

Give me this chance,
I'll prove to you.
That forever you will be happy,
My love will always be true.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Christina

    Gosh lol another wonderful write!!! keep up the great writting!!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 18 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    Well.. .the emotions are genuine.. i wud just like them to show a little more.. ur poem is a lil lacking in expression and description.. but keep workin. ur on the right track :)

  • 18 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Beautiful. you expressed your feelings, amazinly throughout the poem, but it was simple and easy to read. Relitivly short, but really good!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Very beautiful, I really liked this poem a lot. What sometimes disappoints me are the grammatical errors and oversights because I feel they sometimes detract from what you're trying to convey, because you have such a way with expressing your feeling. Still a good piece!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna

    I really like this...it was beautifully written your emotions just pour out of it...the message was great. keep it up!

    MickeysBabyGurl

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