Day That He Dies

by Mommy And Me   Jul 15, 2007


Day That He Dies

Looking out upon the meadow
Watching shadows;
That the clouds formed,
Until they transformed...

Transformed into silent gray skies;
She holds his lies,
Up to her chest
She can't protest...

Protest against enraged thunder,
He's down under
And she now cries;
...Day that he dies.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Again i didnt think this was very good, compared to your others. I mean the flow wasnt very good, but it was ok, i give it a 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Si sI

    Wow this is a good poem! very heartfelt.. great job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    First of all this poem doesn't desreve to be down voted xD But I wish you have made it longer, you have a great vocab, it flowed nicely too, well done.

    5/5! keep up the good work!

    *Haha there I've commented on you now xD*
    Btw. It was nice talking to you. TC

  • 16 years ago

    by Mihaela

    I like a lot this poem,it means a lot for me cause i know what you felt when you wrote it...Congratulations and take good care of you.Best regards..XxX

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