The Love Poem (Etheree)

by Corruption   Jul 17, 2007


1. Love,
2. perfect,
3. magical,
4. She is all this
5. And man, so much more
6. She is the girl I need
7. Ill care for you till I die
8. That is the truth so dont doubt it
9. Baby, I want to love you always
10. So please dont ever let me forget you.

** etheree is a poem that goes from one syllable all the way to ten or it can also go from ten down to one**
i decided to write an etheree because someone i know wrote one and it was fantastic so i wanted to try it out this is my first and well not sure if i did all perfect comments would be great plz lol

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was a great poem, I love this style definitly one of my fav's. You portrayed such sweet emotions within the lines of this poem I thought it was really good and nicely written. Keep up the good work~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Dying Beautifully

    Hey Keenan so this is what you were trying to figure out ok that makes more sense now...I like it I have seen them somewhere before but I can't remember where..Well your is more interesting:)

    Beck Bravo

  • 16 years ago

    by Alissa

    This was really good, it has a great meaning to it!! I like your creativity and everything, the words seemed so heart felt. You used "baby" the first time ever, wow:| lol, first time i saw that from you. But it was great!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis one of my favorite and fisrt styles i accomplished, and i think you did an excellent job at it, i give it a 5/5!!! keep up the new styles!!!

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