Portrait

by Veamm   Jul 18, 2007


Portrait

Draw my memories, Paint my dilemmas
half full masks, shaded by palettes
rewind tragedy, play them, they fall
one by one, all of you, take my soul

Cleaned hollow faces, scar tissues
rainbow of sad colors, mixed hues
framed sins, brink of emptiness
blinded by light, sounds of deftness

Rubber brush, bruises on instinct
dumb, lust sacks in districts
feel it, mind played with tricks
my hand shook, enough, I'm sick

Tired of my skim trials, I'm dumb
Already cried, scared to love
imagine me moved because I'm weak
done my portrait, true, I'm a freak

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jenn

    I Like how you used art in this.
    "Draw my memories, Paint my dilemmas"
    When reading this first line, I started to wonder what those works of art might look like. Very mentally stimulating.

    "rainbow of sad colors, mixed hues
    framed sins, brink of emptiness"
    Love how instead of coming up with different ways to just plainly say depression or sadness. You Described your feelings as a painting, helping me capture the painting I was wondering about in the beginning.

    Masterpiece!
    5/5
    Jenn.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Very unique. It really reminded of abstract art. It's so interesting how you basically just listed things off. 4.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    I LOVE the way it's written the wording, the flow.
    It all is perfect for this poem

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    You have a great way with the way you put the words together. this poem is very good i loved reading it!!...

    5/5
    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Woe

    Wow.. i dont even have words for this.. its amazing. i love it. youre very good at this.. keep it up -X-amanda-X-

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