This Prince

by JaMeS   Jul 18, 2007


Day in day out we play this game,
on a rocky road to nowhere,
we've danced along false hope and lie's,
i doubt you even cared,

you cheat, deceive and hurt
and fraud me all along,
before i was too entranced by love,
to hear your seductive song,

now i push you away,
for finally can i open my eyes,
i see the witch in front of me,
that was my lover in disguise,

this pathway hurts us most now,
the princess will start to moan,
I'm sorry my darling for i give up,
now this prince will walk alone.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by taylor

    !!!! i absolutely loved it!!
    ;)
    xoxTaylor

  • 18 years ago

    by tears i cry

    This is alot better although there is one mistake
    for finally can i open my eyes,
    i'm assuming it's supossed to be
    for finally i can open my eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney

    Great write! I think a lot of people can relate to this, yet in different ways. Truely amazing!
    5/5
    *Brittney

  • 18 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Good rhyme and I really like the word choice.
    I'm sure every prince will find his very own princes.
    Enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Beautiful piece

    keep it up
    xox

Read All Comments (24)

More Poems By JaMeS