Wow
this is such a good poem
really sad it brought a tear to my eye
and made me think alot of my grandfather
very good job
this poem had everything a poem needs good job:):)

keenan

It was sad but also a well written poem, i give it a 5/5

Its so sweet nice job good flow

Truely amazing and superordiante freeverse piece. I can totatlly figure out your love and grie plus mourn for your grandparent. I truly love this piece and gave you 5/5 :)

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Fsams

It's good for you that you dedicated this poem for your grandparents.

Uhm It's a great poem. Just a suggestion not to use a lot of I's and split it into stanzas =)

And last :) This is just a suggestion okay. Change the title to. "The Last Dance" ^_^

Anyway it's a great poem. keep up the good work.

As I have said many times I envy the poets that have mastered free verse the way you have . The content of this poem is very touching

Awww this is such a heartfelt poem, i could really feel your paina and anguish as you had to let them go, but also your determination to get on with your life * jsut as they would want you to* it was a really well written poem.. very touching! 5/5!!
xXx

Aww really sweet nice way to match it to a dance and music well done!

Awww, this is a very sweet sad poem.. i liked it very much. i rated this a 5

This is such a sweet and heartfelt poem, the words and imagery are so powerful. It's amazing the things we can remember no matter how young we are if there so close to our heart. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

This is so heartbreaking and yet beautifully written at the same time, the emotion and depth are clearly sensed and I found the whole piece to be very moving.

This one almost made me cry.. all your poems are soo good lol

I hate long poems really but this is one is different it was really sad and at the same it was so touching and sweet.. great work, keep it up and best wishes!!

I hate long poems really but this is one is different it was really sad and at the same it was so touching and sweet.. great work, keep it up and best wishes!!

Awww this is so sweet and sad at the same time...i almost cried...i loved it.5/5

A good free verse poem which I really liked. I found the emotion to be quite sweet throughout this. A heartbraking piece which you wrote in a great dedication. Well done hun. Enjoyed it.

THAT WAS SO SAd it made me cry alot im one of the lucky few ttthat have all there grand parents 5/5 for making me cry

I absolutely loved this poem!
omg!
lol.
It was great. it really showed how you felt.. and I loved the ending.. That was my favorite part.
It was a sad poem, but it was a good sad poem.
keep it up.
=]

Such a deep and touching poem. Good and sad all at the same time. love it