Quitting

by Noelle Wright   Jul 20, 2007


Oh how you fill my lungs with eagerness
Placing my lips to you is sweeter then a kiss
Oh how could I ever replace
That lovable taste
Hard candy just won't do
Bubble gum isn't gummy enough
Oh boy oh boy quitting smoking
Really is tough.

(inspired while smoking and thought it was cute^^)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Francine

    Lol that was cute. At first I thought it was about a boy and then (duhhhhhhh) I realized what it was. Well I don't smoke so I guess I didn't catch on lol. But I loved it anyway.

  • 18 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Lol, good poem and writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    Haha thats a kute diff =]]. thanx for the comment!! i dont mind lol =]]

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Thnkz I am glad u liked it..I liek ur poemz too!
    -sarah

  • 18 years ago

    by Corinne

    Cute, clever and funny - You'll want to fix the word to "fill" instead of feel :-)

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