Below Freezing

Loneliness is a very sad emotion
and all I could think is if I could just
reach out and touch someone hold
someone anyone that it would all be
Ok again.
A sad read and an excellent write
thank you for sharing and write on,
Bogie

What a way with words!!
^human quilt^

^liquify
these winter feelings
into summer rain^

Very creative descriptions. Beautifully written.

A most excellent poem, Melissa. The opening lines are terrific.

X

"but there's no one around
just cold stone
and the heartbeat of my pen
slowly icing over"

I loved these lines and the way you refer to the concept of coldness and ice in this poem. That may not make sense but point blank I love this. : )