A Few Notes Taken

by Mr M   Jul 21, 2007


Note the faithful evening moon
And how it renders from above
The light I send within the night
That is for you my love.

Note the dawn that hides it there
To safely keep it well
Beneath the dew drops everywhere
Until the eve, again it tells.

Note the days and nights that pass
As you think on days yet born.
Remember the light that my love has
And our moon that never goes outworn.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Debbie

    I somewhat felt an occupational jealousy with this poem. How charming. Gosh, it took my breath away by the comely beauty it brought into life.

    "Note the days and nights that pass
    As you think on days yet born.
    Remember the light that my love has
    And our moon that never goes outworn."

    Ah! Lovely... Simply lovely, Mr. M... :) I'm utterly enchanted.

  • 18 years ago

    by katy

    This was such a great poem loved it 5/5 xx

  • 18 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Very romantic Douglass......nice....

  • 18 years ago

    by brianna

    Oh it was great!! i love it, i got great visual from that good job

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