Crimson Rain

by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx   Jul 23, 2007


I carve a crimson X across my heart
To show how you have torn me apart
Inside and out
Filling me with doubt
You've brought back the old habit of mine
Of cutting and cutting, really deep lines
They bleed and they seep
But I shall not weep
All over my arms and near my heart
I am covered with new, fresh scars
Cutting takes away my pain
And I like the look of crimson rain

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  • 18 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Love it! Very deep and a great write!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    That was relly good

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    It is alittle cliche but that is nothing to stress about, the wording was excellent, the emotion was easy to pick up, and the imagery was vivid. You did an excellent job on this 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Teria

    "seep, weep" << didn't rly like that rhyme.
    It was a kind of.. well, it was a cutting poem.
    So, I can't fairly say what I want to. Which is why I haven't voted.
    It has great emotion, and great meaning.. Just, I'm not quite sure.

    It's a good poem, don't get me wrong.
    But, everytime someone brings up 'cutting' I tend to think 'clicheclichecliche' but every single emotion is cliche. Lol. So, yeah.

  • 18 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    So beautiful almost erotic! :D 5/5 FOR SURE! :D!

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