Drowning

by Rose not your average   Jul 27, 2007


You can hear the water,
As it closes in on you.
You feel like your going to be slaughtered.
You can feel your lips,
They are blue.
You gasp for air,
You wish this were a dream.
The water chocks you.
You can here it roaring,
And then you are falling,
Falling from the water,
Into water below.
And thats the end

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow thats really good very sad though
    its alot deeper than just ur words

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    Omg i felt like i was drowning when i was reading it it was soo good.. you really captured the feeling, and i know, because i was trapped in a river with an atv on my head.. i almost died.. you did an aweosme job.. cept i think you have a typo...
    instead of feel you lips is it supposed to be feel your lips??
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Amanda

    Another great piece. I like the emotions in this. Very creative. Def. 5/5!

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