So Far Away

by Wake   Jul 28, 2007


Something , keeps on pulling me down
and i just - cannot feel the ground
Nothing - is left to be found
'cuz no - one was ever around.

And i feel like this faded picture
i feel out of place
I feel like this shaded fixture
And i feel , So Far Away.

Can you , hear it scream within me?
its crushing , your ever line
The conscience , wants to find a way out
Cant you bloody see its time?

All the - time that you wasted
when you - said you needed time
All the feelings, you've jaded
When you , tried to keep me in line

And all the times you were near me
i felt so far away
The pain of that time still remains with me,
I've to go through it everyday.

But now i can see it much more clearly
'cuz I'm much more firm than i was
broken i was at the start of it
but now its all good because.

I can see the stars are shining now
and they're much brighter than my scars
I've left everything behind now,
and i can see who you truly are.

And it makes me feel like this faded picture
and i feel so out of place
and i feel like this shaded fixture
and i feel , So Far Away.

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Written by Wake

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    Aww Dang sounds like whoever it is isn't being so kind with your heart. Breaking it and leaving scars when it finally heals. Its good to let it go, Hold onto it to long and you'll never be able to heal. Also sounds like you need someone to repaint you and maybe then you wont feel like a faded picture. Someone to put a smile back on your face and give you a place close to them so you don't feel so far away. 5/5 You always have me as a friend :) Remember I'm here your not drifting no farther :P lol Excellent poem Wake! ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by ShAnEL

    Wow nice poem it has so much meaning to it well keep up the good work I gave u a 5/5 :)
    -Shanel-

  • 16 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Awesome, I love the line " I feel like this faded picture..."

  • 16 years ago

    by Linds

    It's good.

    --lindsey

  • 16 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    A MAZ ING