I would die for you

by Rose not your average   Aug 1, 2007


I have screwed up.
I have cried.
I have lied.
I have sinned.

But I am willing to try,
To try harder.
To make myself a better person.
To make myself a better friend.

You were always there,
You always will care.
You would cry if I cried.
You would be my guide.

But now as your hand slips,
Those tears fall,
The blood drips.
Ill die in your place!

Ill suffer the pain.
Ill great death,
With a smile.
I just cant let you go!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Awww i like this poem much emotion and meaning
    great job 5/5

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by amber

    Great Job. I really liked it!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    youdid a fantastic job on it
    i liked the second last stanza the best
    good job:D:D
    thx for the comment

    Keenan

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