That's what we have, babe

by Riley   Aug 3, 2007


The touch of your skin on mine,
The taste of your lip's delights.
Have me entranced in your aura,
And send me to the heaven's heights.

Your beautiful eyes when they meet mine,
Send me on a collision course ride.
My stomach flutters and my lungs give out,
When we stand side by side.

When you grab my hand to cross the street,
My goosebumps spring to life and show.
With each and every passing moment,
I know that our love grows.

I know you love me too,
When I look into your sweet eyes.
You laugh and do your cute little smile.
A smile incapable of lies.

Your hair in between my fingers,
Send me off like a shooting star.
It's like I climbed into a cannon,
And have been shot miles far.

Your delicious skin brushing my lips,
The soft freckles on your cheek.
Send me soaring high,
And make my knees frail and weak.

My love for you, and yours for me,
Have my heart jumping at your sight.
An exhilarating thrill shivers inside of me.
And my head grows faint and light.

More than infatuation,
More than simply looks.
But a beauty of two lives as one.
Something you can't read in books.

That's what we have babe,
That's what we have.
Love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved this poem. That's what I have for this poem. xD Haha.

    I loved the emotion, flow, and all the above. xD
    it was just amazing.

    Out of six poems.
    I found two mistakes.
    I honestly think you're either God or go over your poems about seven times before you put them on xD
    Not that it would be bad to do so.

    Wonderful job, darling.
    I've enjoyed reading, and will continue. xD

    keep it up.
    5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittney

    'A smile incapable of lies.'
    ^favorite line.
    this poem speaks of true love and I love that. Being in love is the greatest feeling in the world that everyone should have the chance to experience. I loved this poem. It flowed so well.
    Your very talented.
    5/5
    *Brittney

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was beautiful. I felt so alive and so happy when i read this, it was so well written, and it flowed so well. everything about it was just beautiful.
    love Tara-Kayx

  • 18 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This was a beautiful love poem. There was a nice flow and good rhymes as well. Nice job. 5/5

    marcella

  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    Well your poem is exceptionallly good :). I can see your creativitya nd the ability to use metaphors and figurative phrases. But you could change the 12fth line like "I know that our love will grow" then it will be better I feel :)

    Any ways the poem is cohesive, creative, descriptive and very beautiful.

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