Feelings Within.

by ABake   Aug 4, 2007


Feelings, trying to be released.
Wanting to be explained.
Yet, they stay inside my soul.
Desperately, they await to be freed.

Fighting to make sense.
But, it just doesn't happen.
Another hidden meaning,
Once again will be passed by.

Anger, building up quickly.
Words, that stay in my mind.
Pen, waiting to write again.
Blank paper, stares at me like an enemy.

They may never know,
But it's a warning sign,
To the feelings within.
The pain forced to hide.

::Very short, but the emotion I put into this piece made it extremely long for me::

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  • 16 years ago

    by 1A kayla

    Omg! that was so awesome i loved it so much!! keep on writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    "Words, that stay in my mind"

    I know. I know how this feels. for me though, it's not because of anger exactly but they're still some words never expressed, words that stay in my mind. I know the feeling. Pretty well-explained Amberr!

    Marjan

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    Your flow was really awesome. At first I thought the poem rhymed, then I went back and read it again and was like no...these words just fit together well.
    Awesome work. I can feel the emotion in the poem and it was totally relatable.
    You rock :)

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Amazing! You are a great writer Amber.
    This one did have a lot of emotion in it.

    Blank paper, stares at me like an enemy.
    ^^ That line just stood out to me... Maybe it's because I get that way sometimes. I can't stand it when paper just stares at you and you can't write on it. :p

    Fantastic job!
    5.5
    Ciao<3

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