Autumn sunshine

by Rose not your average   Aug 6, 2007


Walking out into the crisp cold air.
You step on some leaves,
Crunch, crunch.
You love the colors,
Red, yellow, gold, some green.
The sun I shining,
It’s the autumn sunshine.
It makes a warm glow on the earth,
Making you warm in the cold breeze.
The sun makes the world glow a bit.
On a morning like this,
It’s like a kiss.
Your cheeks red from the cold,
But you feel so bold,
It’s the autumn sunshine.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Great description, it's wonderful, nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    Pretty vivid images i'm getting from this, and I can sense the imagination and warmth.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Vey wonderful for me... cos is very-very nice...

    (r/r/c time=forum)

  • 16 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Ah such a calm feeling! I love autumn, its my favorite season. This poem also has great imagery. I could almost feel the soft breeze and the leaves. I love it! Keep it up!

    ~Morgan~

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    "The sun I shining", shouldn't it be "is shining" And the flow is a little off. Besides that I think it's a nice nature poem. Autumn is my favorite season and you described it beautifully. 5/5

    marcella

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