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by FallenGrace Aug 6, 2007
Sadness, depression /
As another tear falls on my face,
another voice will scream out "grace",
another person will cry with me,
another soul will die with me.
The drugs that arn't suposed to work,
Will make me feel a little worse,
Every pill that makes me better,
Will make my eyes a little wetter.
Nothing you can say or do,
Will make me stop hurting you,
All i want is to be free,
Why do you keep loving me?
Awesome poem! I loved it! Definalty a 5/5! Keep up the spectacular work!!!
I can relate to this poem A LOT. very very good! 5/5 keep up the work!
First stanza is the greatest. This poem is short but very powerful. Topic is original and it is very easy to read. 5/5
Amazing skill!! i love your poems... well written, awesome rhyming... beautiful "story"... i can relate to this one... very well done hun
Wow this was beautiful
nice continuous rhyme
i liked the middle stanza the best
great poem though