Help me help you

by FallenGrace   Aug 6, 2007


As another tear falls on my face,
another voice will scream out "grace",
another person will cry with me,
another soul will die with me.

The drugs that arn't suposed to work,
Will make me feel a little worse,
Every pill that makes me better,
Will make my eyes a little wetter.

Nothing you can say or do,
Will make me stop hurting you,
All i want is to be free,
Why do you keep loving me?

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Awesome poem! I loved it! Definalty a 5/5! Keep up the spectacular work!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    I can relate to this poem A LOT. very very good! 5/5 keep up the work!

    BabyGurl

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    First stanza is the greatest. This poem is short but very powerful. Topic is original and it is very easy to read. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angela

    Amazing skill!! i love your poems... well written, awesome rhyming... beautiful "story"... i can relate to this one... very well done hun
    <3ang
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    Wow this was beautiful
    nice continuous rhyme
    i liked the middle stanza the best
    great poem though
    5/5

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