Screams Drown

by ben thompson   Aug 10, 2007


Insanity ensues
Malicious lies
Life destroyed
Family cries

Needles forced
Shivering skin
Secretly captured
Torture begins

Strapped down
Evils hold
Knife freed
Blood cold

Mysterious clues
Never found
Body discarded
Screams drown

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  • 16 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    I liked how you only had two words in each line and it still made perfect sense. Awesome. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    Wow this is awesome, 5/5. i really like it. thanks so much for the poem comments.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Ben
    This piece gave me chills. Wonderful imagery and word choices. How deep and disturbing. This paints a very dark image for the mind.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

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