Close Enough..

by Wake   Aug 11, 2007


**otay.. i dunno where this came from .. i just wrote all of this up ^^''.. cuz..err.. i just felt like writing..o_0''
anyways..i didn't knew which category to put it in..and i really don't knw wt this is supposed to mean so plz forgive me if the stanzas dont make any sense .. >.<
->All comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated ^_^<-...so plz comment ^.^'' ..tk cr..

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Well, Its hard to say
how i feel today.
But it feels so good
just to live again.

And it'll take time to get used
to see things this way.
But I've finally understood
why i had to run away..

Now, I dont know whats going.
I feel I'm close enough
to stretch my arms out wide
and feel the rain fall down again...

The yellow and blue stars that shine
slowly piercing through the translucent sky
Fall down on me along with the city lights
And its not everyday that i feel I'll be alright.

Not turning pages for once
to see where I'll end up
And i know its kinda crazy
but i feel like I'm whole again..
Dont know what I'm saying
but I'm close enough
to spread my wings out wide
and feel the wind on my face again...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    This was so perfect. I understood it in my own way. I related to it in my own way as well. This literally took my breath. The words and phrases you used made it SO friggin strong and I am putting it in my favorites. Thank you b/c this made me think! 100/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miss Behaving

    Haha Wow I would surely call that random :P I think I do that a lot when I'm writing a poem. I know what I want to talk about in my poems but I think I skip around a bit lol. Very Detailed made me smile and want to fly :) I love the night maybe I should swing during the night and I bet ill feel like I have spreaded my wings and started flying ;) 5/5 I loved it! Keep it up! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by TrueLover

    A poem doesn't need to make perfect sense, nor does the arrangement...It's all about expressing yourself, isn't it? A poem is supposed to be your way of speaking to the world, or just to yourself if you want. Your emotions don't have to be organized. Great write!

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