Journey Within

by OHgreenman   Aug 11, 2007


Filled with dark emotions
Of what I left behind
Memories of joyous laughter
Face tattooed upon my mind

Flood gates have opened
Soul cries for your return
Broken heart grown cold
Raging fire still burns

Path of obscure awaits
Now walking it alone
Cyclops on a journey
Seeing half, what is shown

What will I find
Once I've reached the end?
Quiet soul? Warm heart?
Answers, just around the bend

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    WOW!!! Incredible poem, atmosphere is powerful and imagery is great. Very original and flow is excellent. You described emotions amazingly. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Answers lead to questions and questions lead to answers a never ending cycle nice poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    First off thank you for having me on your favorites, I added you just as well. Your dark pieces are a favorite to me. In your words it just connects many things in my life and it makes me reflect. I wanted to keep reading because it was like a short story of love that went wrong, just as it has in mine a while ago, perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Excellent flow to this write! And I loved the part about answers being just around the corner.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I really enjoyed this piece, It was really deep holding great emotions. The flow was spot on almost chant like, really smooth and didn't falter at all. You wrote a poem which held such truth and i'm sure many people can relate to this no matter how young or how old. A beautiful piece you have here. Loved it alot. ~mel

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