Tick Tocking

by Waiting4mywings2heal   Aug 12, 2007


Tick Tock
The alarms warning
Tick Tock
His footsteps coming
Tick Tock
The door opening
Tick Tock
The Sheet Disappearing
Tick Tock
The pains beginning
Tick Tock
My cry for help are failing
Tick Tock
The pain is ending
Tick Tock
The door is closing
Tick Tock
His footsteps are leaving
Tick Tock
The Blade is Sliding
Tick Tock
The blood is falling
Tick Tock
I'm Leaving

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  • 16 years ago

    by paul alexander

    Good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Hmm.. well a very.. cooll way u described this event here.. you just wrote a stroy on ur murder.. cool.. gr8 wrk done.. nicely put together

  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    Artistique! I love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron

    Yarr i agree with the repetition, it was good. me likey

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Disappearing
    make D small plz

    Rest i loved your poem
    I got the point how you are ending your poem when he is goin
    I hope that nothin such happens with anyone
    good work I loved the repetition of Tic Tock
    Keep it up.5/5
    tc
    your friend
    Rohan

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