Sunset (haiku)

by Rose not your average   Aug 12, 2007


All the bright colors,
As the sun begins to set,
It brings warmth to me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Karin Erlacher

    This haiku made me smile.. In so few words you managed to capture the beauty of a sunrise. I loved it.. Good job! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Haiku is poem about nature and this piece shouldn't be in the special event category. Imagery is good but it isn't best haiku that I read. 4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Aww sweet. very cute
    i gota go now but i will comment more wen i come back on

  • 16 years ago

    by Maria

    Short and simple but at the same time very good. Sometimes only a few words can say a whole lot. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    It's amazing how with such little words, you have managed to write something so beautiful. Excellent job, shows a lot of skill.

    Take Care!

    -Shannon <3

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