Fly

by tara   Aug 14, 2007


Fly.

Feel the wind on your shoulder,
All the words,
Who are not yet spoken,
Vanish into thin air,
Like they were not there.

Any moment,
Anything can change,
Let go of your yesterday,
And fly away.

Can you hear it calling,
Can you feel it coming,
The wings inside of you,
Who will take you away,
From yesterday.

Because its time,
Time to fly,
Until you dont cry.

The world is feeling hollow,
like there is no tomorrow,
close your eyes,
and break away

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    I rele like this very inpresive<33333

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    I really like the flow in the poem, had a good ending to it, it only lost flow at this part,

    "Because its time,
    Time to fly,
    Until you dont cry."

    That part made it loose flow a little but I love the meaning of the poem and love the how it all wraped up, Needs a little bit of touching up, but so does everyone elses poems, (espicially mine) =p

    Keep up the good work, Keep writeing =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Gr8 job!!! really an awesome poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Eri

    I love it
    I understand where ur coming frm

  • 16 years ago

    by njabulo b

    Very nice poem, its expression and a content filled with emotions. 'Any momeny, any thing can change' i like those words on the 2nd stanza