Declaration of Independence

Alright Folks, so here is the thing I suck a** at grammar/punctuation so if you have any suggestions that will make this better please inform me.

Also, for those of you who aren't really sure the message I was trying to get across. This is about someone who thinks that they are in a great relationship and that they found the "one". However, this person soon changes into a monster and shows a whole different side.
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Now hush my little children it is time to take a brief nap.
So lay your head tenderly down on my lap.
Close your eyes and escape further into your dreamland; where nothing is harder than it seems.
Things are always different than what they mean.
That's right fall faster and faster into the land of no return.
The longer your are there the more that you seem to learn.
Fall deeper and deeper into a peaceful sleep.
The demons soon will start to overrule.
There is nothing anyone can do for you, fool.
Close your eyes and escape into your dreamland.
Evil is there waiting to hold your hand.
So be your own knight,and fight your own fight.
Waiting on the other side is a path to the light.