I Need Someone

by Kristina   Aug 16, 2007


Sometimes I feel lonely in a crowd,
Everyone has someone to talk to,
But me, I feel so left out.

I've always been on my own,
Always waiting for someone
To walk into my world and make it right.

I only need a friend here for me
And I think I could make it by,
But without anyone in my life, I cry.

I'm so depressed and no one cares,
It's like I'm invisible to the world,
Only everyone can see me when they want to.

Copyright © July 16, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Gee reminds me of me. I'm very unsocail so whenever people have to pick their lab partners or things like that unless I have a friend in the class (not just like saying hi to them in the hallway friend) I feel very left out. This was very much like me for 8th grade my most hated and depressing year of school. Very good poem. 5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    The last line is a little long and messes with the great flow you going throughout the rest of the piece. The emotion was expressed well in this one as well. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    that first part was great, well not much as 2nd&3rd..i can feel something is missing with this poem..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Very deep and sad poem
    i like it each part for it especailly this part
    "Always WAITING FOR SOMEONE
    To walk into my world and make it right"
    lol
    take care

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Great poem, 5/5

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