Doubts

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Aug 17, 2007


One moment of happiness,
Brings thousands of doubting thoughts.
With every fleeting minute,
The cloudier the mind becomes with second guesses.

Can the moment of joy
Truly be real, or is it all a fairy tale?
Why must the mind paint such lies,
Or is it a weakness that I believe them?

Unwanted questions with missing answers.
Why can't my heart and mind just trust?
Is this self protection,
Or do I just corrupt all happy thoughts?

Soon happiness darkens down the path of sadness.
Leaving me alone with just my thoughts.
In the end I know one true fact,
Doubts will be the only thing left.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is real and i love the way you explain things into detail its so hard sometimes to express what you mean, especially in poetry. So id like to say well done again becuase you are so unique in your writing :D xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    That poem wasnt clear to me at first until i read it again and it just made me think i really like it, the way its understated but yet meaningful enough to not leave your mind!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TamborineMan

    I liked the subject matter. However, the poem seems very rough and the flow was unsteady and caused me to lose pace and, subsequently, lose the full emotion you were trying to convey. Thanks for the read

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Very nice poem...sometimes all life leaves is your own thoughts..that tends to happen...

    the flow is great on this poem.nice job.5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice poem with true quality and meaning. 5/5 for the nice descriptions and the cohesive content :)

    Tc
    Fsams

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