Family's Sad Story; My Sweet Girls ... PART 3

by Danielle   Apr 28, 2004


My sweet girls
I need you here
Both gone Im alone
The worst of my fears

My sweet girls
I can't go on
I'm weak n' alone
now that your gone

My sweet girls
Are you watching me?
I LOVE YOU BOTH
Why did you leave?

My sweet girls
Im taking my life
I need you here
So I take this knife

My sweet girls
Please turn your head
I dont want you to see
My heart black and dead

My sweet girls
I hope to see you above
I told you Id never leave you
You have my undying love

My sweet girls
Well all be one
With this cut, with this knife
All my pain is gone

Now as I watch daddy cry
He lives his life in pain
Finally ending his life
Them all together again

I tell a familys sad story
Always and forever in our heart
There love so real and true
Death couldnt keep them apart

There's a Part 4

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  • 18 years ago

    by husbandlover

    Omg i read them all i think they're all awesum.i cant wait to see da 4th part!! 5/5 keep writing.love always,faerie

  • 19 years ago

    by jescelle

    try writing about how they are trying to find each other in heaven, its a big heaven you nkow........lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Amy

    i loved how u did the story from 3 different perspectives. shows how talented u are

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    Wth why is my name appearing as David V.

    I love this poem, You are truly a master at transferring thoughts and emotins into words.
    I always look forward to your work. I have much respect for you artistry.
    -David Velazquez

  • 20 years ago

    by МÅťťђĕш Яĕĩŋĕßĕřg

    Nice work, too bad they all had to die. It was a good story, a sad one, but a good one. At least they were all back together again, which makes it a little less sad. Keep up thte good work, as for suggestions for what to do next, I have none.

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