Beautiful gift

by waiting 4 some1   Aug 20, 2007


I knew you were special since the first time we met
But I didn't expect you to cause my frozen heart to melt
You took over my heart there is no space left
For any person to place his love not even a bit
Your love is enormous it has no limits yet
It keeps on increasing I can't stop it nor shift
I searched for another heart in which your love could sit
But I couldn't find better than mine that it fits
It's overpowering love for any heart to lift
So I will hold it without any regret
Thank you for choosing my heart among the whole list
Thank you for choosing me between the rest
I thank you my Lord for this beautiful gift
I owe you myself, I am forever in your debt
thank you for giving me this beautiful gift

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Aww.. how sweet! i love it! great work putting all of ur heart into this poem.. you could see that you used ur emotions in this.. great work protraying this! wonderful work! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Hi little bro,

    You must love this person a lot!
    The words were very well chosen and you poem touched my heart.
    Keep up the great work.

    5/5 sis

  • 16 years ago

    by Joshua Grider

    I thought you really showed true gratitude. :)
    I just didnt get what about...?

  • 16 years ago

    by Meme

    To love someone this way is really a true gift
    Keep it up

    ~gIrL~

  • 16 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    This is such a wonderful poem! i really loved it .. and i feel the exactly the same way.. its like you opened up my heart and loooked inside it..
    i loved your choice of words and your rhyming pattern..
    keep up the wonderful work..
    P.S. thankyou you for you comment.. and i write poems in algebra.. its reallyy boring =)

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