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by On Cupids Bad Side Aug 21, 2007
Love, romance /
Believe it or not, I still think of you.
I can't let you go, it seems.
I know it's already been six long months,
But I still see you in my dreams.
Believe it or not, I still have hope
That we'll be together someday.
I know I'm supposed to forget and move on,
But I can't help feeling this way.
Believe it or not, I compare guys to you,
Just because you were my first one.
I can't believe I'll never get to kiss you again.
I just can't believe that you're gone.
Believe it or not, I still wish sometimes
That you'd take me to my senior prom.
You were a good guy, that one good catch,
The kind I'd bring home to my mom.
Believe it or not, you hurt me so much
Even though my emotions I tried not to show.
The day I found out your dirty little secret,
My heart took such a major blow.
Believe it or not, I still love you a lot
But I know we can never be.
I know you think you're happy with her,
But someday you'll regret not being with me.
by XxEmotionally TakenxX
Great poem! absolutely loved it! i know how it feels...it automatically grabbed my attention..5/5!!! =)
by jennifer leigh
loved it lots
i know how you felt when you wrote it
keep it up
Great poem! The flow was excellent and the emotion was so real...niice job!=]
This poem is great.
It really grabbed my attention.
Reminded me of myself a few months ago.
You'll make it through.
by Sweet Fragility
Such an emotional read that many can relate to. The rhyming isn't forced and the flow is good. Also, I love the second-to-last stanza.
5/5 from me.