Emptiness

by ali   Aug 21, 2007


I'm one scar away from emptiness
But one cut away from freedom
There's nothing left inside of me
But the hope I cling on to
Every time I see you
But you're ashamed of what we used to be
Ashamed of me
I know that deep down
But still I live in hope

Now though as I enter my freedom
Your face swims before my eyes
But then it vanishes
And now I know
Emptiness is all I'll ever have

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  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Ill always be here so think about, it if i am here and ur there. r u still feeling emptyness?

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Aswome... this one kind of made me think.
    this piece is sad but at the same time its like you kno wat to say. excellent flow it was like you drawn me in so fast that i was like is this my piece or hers? =)

  • 16 years ago

    by kaida clover

    Really well done.. its sad but a great piece of writing.. powerful emotion threw out

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Really powerful piece! Everything just goes so well together. Emotions set perfectly and it just goes through to readers mind, which is really good! Amazing piece
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Your poems are so powerful..i really enjoy reading them...keep it up!=]

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