Independent

by Michelle18   Aug 22, 2007


Independent is what I am,
Strong and bold is what I will be.
On my own is where I stand,
Proudness in my eyes is what you will see.

I dont need a guy to make me complete,
I complete every part of me.
When you give up I will proceed,
Not stopping until I reach my destiny.

Proud of this world,
Never will I strife.
Independent girl,
Forever in this life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    You expressed emotions superbly and topic is great. Very unique and interesting, atmosphere is also good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Lol, nice one. A very strong and powerful attitude you have. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I relly like your attitude in this piece.....It drives me crazy those girls who think they need a guy to fulfill their every needs when clearly we can stand on our own.....I hope as you grow up you don't lose this attitude....wonderful write!
    Chels

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