She Tried

by RobinAnn13   Aug 22, 2007


Chaotic thoughts
rage through her mind
she tries to leave
this world behind

And slowly the pain
starts to fade away
will she finally
Leave this life today?

Will anyone notice
if she never comes home
or will they leave her
all alone

left to drown
in emptiness
she just hopes
they remember this

to be someone,
at least she tried
just to find
she had only lied

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    Hmmm, i like this one too, not my fav. but still good, is just somethink seems to be missing... maybe its because its so short... but the flow way still very good, and the word choice way very good as well...4/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    Wow, another good one. Must've been gone through some tramatic to write something that deep.

    another 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Great job!!! i love the rythme of the poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Left to drown
    in emptiness
    she just hopes
    they remember this

    ^ these lines said it all to me! they were soooo powerful! 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Beautiful. I think the flow was really amazing. Emotions were deep and really strong in this and touching piece. REally enjoyed this!
    5/5 Keep it up!

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