I Hate Myself

by Michelle18   Aug 23, 2007


I hate my face,
I hate my hair.
I hate myself so much,
I dont want to go anywhere.

I hate my eyes,
I hate my nose.
This stuff makes me sad,
And nobody knows.

I hate my body,
I hate my voice.
I'd change it all,
If I had the choice.

Why am I so ugly?
God tell me why.
I cant find a guy,
Who loves me for whats on the inside.

I hate myself,
Thats all I can do.
Because I have no beauty,
I wish I was someone new.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sarah

    VERY touching. yet sad, mostly gurls out there have such feelings like this. It's sad to kno that they think of themselves ugly, but they are truly beautiful. good poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    WOWWWWWWWW WHAT SAD POEM
    IT WAS S WELL WRITTEN THROUGH
    I HATE THAT I LIKE IT. BUT I SAID
    ITS GOOD JUST REMEMBER THIS
    ITS ALWAYS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE
    WHO DO THE UGLIEST THINGS.

  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    Nobody isn't ugly, you just need to look in your self... I don't like this poem, you didn't express emotions greatly and atmosphere could be better. You used-I hate-too many times. This is just my opinion but I don't like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Well, the poem is sincere, and that's the only thing that I like about it. I don't want to offend you I'm just saying my opinion. My suggestions are:
    You should write more about your emotions about topic, not just "I hate..."
    The words "I hate" are repeated too many times and that disturbs the flow of the whole piece and leaves really bad impression. You can work on the wording, too.
    I won't rate it, I don't want to downrate your piece just because I don't like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Curry

    Oh wow sometimes i feel this way about myself. :[
    im not sure what to say about this one. 4/5 though :]

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