Because Of You

by Michelle18   Aug 23, 2007


Because of you, Im stuck between a life of love and hate,
I dont know what to choose or which road to take.
Because of you, I hate this life because Im living without you,
It gets so tough trying to make it through.
Because of you, my bright sky has turned to gray,
I only hope there comes a better day.
Because of you,I feel like dying,
I wake up every damn morning crying.
Because of you,I can never love in this life,
I keep thinking about when you said I'd be your wife.
Because of you,my heart's been torn and broken,
Because of you,my lonesome heart has finally spoken.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    The use of repetition is cute
    but some lines in the middle of the poem seem too short, don't they?
    but whatever this is just a detail but the whole poem is beautiful and so sad

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm how sad very heartfelt and touching piece! the message was absolutely true coz love was exactly it hurts in some reasons.. well u had portrayed ur feelings here very well.. keep up the good work and keep on writing all what u feel 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This poem is really great and well written. the flow was very smooth and well worded. Loved this one and it must be 5/5 for sure. Keep writing!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Aw I like this poem very nice job on the
    writing. Kepe up teh wonderful work.
    The flow was a bit off though might want
    to work on that overall great job.
    5/5
    <3tay

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Nice job... I like the way you repeated Because of you

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