Love

by Michelle18   Aug 23, 2007


Love is nothing but a word,
Thats what I'm told,thats what I heard.
But how do they know if they've never found it,
Love is in this world its all around it.
Love is true and not at all fake,
So make it a risk you're willing to take.
I found love and you'll find it too,
Just keep dreaming and it will come true.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Eddie

    Wow short but straight to the point...i looked up to that word a lot when i was younger....i hate it now ha ha but i hope one day i can feel that emotion again

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Beautiful and really positive))
    'Thats what I'm told,thats what I heard' <-- it makes he rhythm dynamic and easy to read this poemanother thing i've noticed about rhythm: almost every line has kinda "to parts" both in rhythm and meaning:
    Love is true ----- and not at all fake,
    So make it a risk ------ you're willing to take.
    I found love -----and you'll find it too,
    Just keep dreaming -----and it will come true.

    i like such way of writing,
    well, though the poem is short, it's meaningful
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    This is simply amazing poem and very enjoyable read and well written poem. Everything was flawless at all. I really love the last line. Another 5/5 for sure!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Thats a cute poem. a nice description of love and i think the flow was almost flawless. nice job. keep it up. 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    Wow. It was really beautiful. It really spoke to me, there was nothing to improve on at least in this poem. I really enjoyed it, Keep going with good work like this. 5/5 Good job