Insurance on Love (Part 3, The Love Series)

by Corruption   Aug 26, 2007


This tragedy has befallen us,
The one we feared.
We broke up,
And now are heartbroken.
For months we didn't speak,
Not a word ,
They were long,
And quite painful.
Although not as much,
As what you did to me.
But somehow we lived.
And lasted apart.
Moving on,
To present day.
When we talk again,
And still able to love...

**This is the third part in the Series i am writing would love for comments and votes. once i get a decent amount of comments on this poem
i will add the next**

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  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    U survived away from each other and didn't talk. wat brought u back to each other what words were exchanged? or do i wait till the end for all my ?'s to be answered

  • 16 years ago

    by Sydney

    Pretty good : ]] The emotions you displayed in the poem were really expressed well. On to the next = D

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Nice poem... DO you always write poems in a series... anyway, your poems are really awesome... you are a nice poet :D Keep up this good work

    Sumit Ojha

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Pretty good..i better understand how the time apart is the climax in life..onward to part 4

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    It was awesome, very good writing skills you have. i loved it.

    the way you explain it and describe it. 5/5